: Posted by Commodore Jen Herr (Commanding Officer (USS Challenger)) in Admin Menu Exam/Course Revision
: : Posted by Katherine Dedul in Admin Menu Exam/Course Revision
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: : My thanks have to go to the following people for their help in the development of the course, and for reading the (several) drafts of it and not laughing to hard.
: : • Amanda Noon
: : • Emma Rouse-Deane
: : • Nikolle Burchett
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: I haven't read through the entire thing yet, but as I was scrolling to the bottom I noticed this...
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: 1. Amanda is eLOA, you can of course correct me if I'm wrong but I highly doubt she was involved in your revision. ;)
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: 2. Emma is iLOA, and pretty sure she wasn't involved in this. ;)
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: 3. Nikolle did appear randomly about a year ago, but other than that I'm pretty sure she's not involved. <G>
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: I don't think we should forget their contributions, but the sentence probably needs rewording to reflect current work and support. :)
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: Jen

Thank you Jen,

I had left the conclusion as is simply because I had nothing to rewrite it with yet. I should've mentioned that in my original note, but blame it on the fact I had vacation brain and just assumed everyone would magically know what was bouncing around inside my head. Silly me. :P

Think of the conclusion portion as a "sample" of what the final conclusion will look like when complete. I'll mention the present people who contributed to the course and then have something along the lines of:

"And additional thanks go to past author of the course, Catherine Potterton and her contributors Amanda Noon, Emma Rouse-Deane and Nikolle Burchett. This course revision has only served to update their very well written course on the administrative functions on ships to reflect our present WeBB system."

Or perhaps just a general thank you to past authors and contributors may be a bit tidier?

Kat