Posted May 5, 2021, 1:16 a.m. by Cadet Jordy Kleine (Security Officer) (Jordy Kleine)
Posted by Lieutenant Junior Grade Henry Rodier (Chief of Security) in Cadet Kleine - Check-In
Posted by Cadet Jordy Kleine (Security Officer) in Cadet Kleine - Check-In
Posted by Lieutenant Junior Grade Henry Rodier (Chief of Security) in Cadet Kleine - Check-In
Posted by… suppressed (3) by the Post Ghost! 👻
It was 0910 Jordy is excited but also nervous about starting on a Academy ship. Jordy is thinking if he will be a good Security Officer. Now he is learning everything he needs to know about being a security officer. When Jordy is done he thinks that he can do it im excited about it, i dont have to be nervous it will be all fine i hope.
“Computer, what time is it?”
“It is 0930,” the computer replies.
Jordy’s next thought was ‘O no, I need to go before I will be late to my check-in.’
Jordy is just in time there and he is going to check in
Cadet Jordy Kleine - SecurityOOC: Hey! It’s great to have you with us. This is me talking out of character, as shown by the “OOC” marking. Once I want to talk in-character, I’ll type “IC”. Good job on your sign-off! A lot of people don’t get that right away.
You did this in parts of your post, but just a quick reminder: our posting style is past-tense, meaning your character’s actions are describe by words like was, did, said, didn’t, etc.
IC:
Chief of Security Henry Rodier stood as Cadet Kleine entered his office, gesturing for him to take a seat. The PADD he had been holding flickered off, and Henry frowned, but with a quick shake of his head he refocused on the matter at hand. “Cadet Kleine, I presume?” he asked.~ Lt. Jr. Gr. Henry Rodier - Chief of Security
Cadet Jordy Kleine said yes sir i am Cadet Kleine
~ Cadet Jordy Kleine - Security
“I’m Lieutenant Junior Grade Rodier. I’ll be your Department Head for the duration of your stay with us on the Challenger. How’ve you been finding the ship so far?” Henry sat back down at his desk, and indicated with a small gesture that Jordy should do the same in one of the two chairs facing it.
~ Lt. Jr. Gr. Henry Rodier - Chief of Security
Jordy sat down and said i think it is a beautiful ship
~ Cadet Jordy KleineOOC: So, a couple more quick tips. You can leave the little > symbols out of your response, since those are just for past responses. And when your character is speaking, use quotes, like this:
IC:
“Good to hear.” Henry replied. “Now then. Tell me, why did you join Starfleet?” He reclined back, relaxing into his chair.~ Lt. Jr. Gr. Henry Rodier - Chief of Security
Jordy replied because i always wanted to join it since i knew what it was and i like to Explore new worlds and That is what starfleet does
Cadet Jordy Kleine - security
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