Posted Aug. 3, 2019, 9:13 p.m. by Admiral Joe P (Librarian / TECH Chairman) (Joe P)
Posted by Fleet Captain Adam W. (Former Ruler of the Club) in Discussion on Bill to Amend Fleet Command (Re submission)
Posted by Fleet Admiral James Sinclair (President) in Discussion on Bill to Amend Fleet Command (Re submission)
This is a proposal for an amendment to Fleet Command and Other Mundane Matters (FComm). Discussion will be open for 7 days, ending on 8/10/19.Proposed Change:
- Change requirements to be a Fleet Commander or Assistant Fleet CommanderOriginal Text:
(Under the section of “Fleet Structure and Command”, the subsection “Restrictions”)
The Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO of the fleet in question, or a current or former XO in the fleet in question with CO experience. The Assistant Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO or XO of the fleet in question.Proposed Revision:
The Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO, or a current XO with CO experience. The Assistant Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO or XO.Fleet Admiral James Sinclair
PresidentI’d say:
The Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO. The Assistant Fleet Commander must be a current or former CO or XO.
As far as I can tell, what you had in the first sentence after the comma doesn’t add anything.
Adam
Yeah, I think I like Adam’s suggested wording a little better, because it clears up a potential source of ambiguity about whether Acting CO counts (even though it is explictly said later that it does not). Plus I’m all for brevity.
Joe
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