Specification Review: Independence-class Heavy Frigate (TOS), Draft 2 - Review OPEN Until August 31, 2020

Posted Sept. 8, 2020, 11:06 a.m. by Captain Nicholas Villarreal (Engineering Director) (Nicholas Villarreal)

Posted by Captain Nicholas Villarreal (Engineering Director) in Specification Review: Independence-class Heavy Frigate (TOS), Draft 2 - Review OPEN Until August 31, 2020
Robert Archer has submitted a second draft of the TOS/DSC-era Independence-Class Heavy Frigate for review. It is intended for use with the TOS-themed USS Sentinel, given that the Governor-class has a duplicate in the Kurtzman-class USS Chernov, and the design states that it was built in 2257, which is after the intended start point of the Sentinel. Feel free to take a look and give your feedback, especially if you have knowledge particular to either series that could be helpful.

The review period will end on 31 August 2020.

Nicholas Villarreal
Engineering Director

Changelog From Draft 1 - Draft 2:

Removed reference to the LCS of modern times from history/mission overview
Removed reference to the Daedalus class saucer to avoid confusion in ship structure section
Punctuation and sentence formatting clean up across the spec
Cleaned up the bridge and auxiliary bridge descriptions
Removed 30 inch screen in conference room replaced with triangular 3 screen box
Edited brig section a bit regarding force fields
Cleaned up the lab types and edited deck plan accordingly
Changed 2-D holo display to 3-D in science labs
Removed dispensers from rooms and references to a micro transporter
Trimmed down the lab types in the science lab section
Edited mission profiles
Cleaned up grammar and punctuation across the spec
Reworded the phaser armament for balance reasons
Removed the machine shop
Cleaned up the defensive shield/polarization system sections
Edited the shuttlebay section
Edited naming and registries

INDEPENDENCE-CLASS
CATEGORY: FRIGATE
VARIANT: HEAVY
DESIGNER: ROBERT ARCHER
MARK I
Draft 2
DATE: 10 AUGUST 2020

SNIP

SUBMITTED 10 AUGUST 2020
Robert Archer

Apologies for the delay in the process. The specification review period is closed, and the specification is returned to its designer for revision.

Nicholas Villarreal
Engineering Director

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